Motivation:
Sir Edmund Hilary
Learning Objectives:
Level 3
- Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
- Select, form, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
- Use language features appropriately, showing a developing understanding of their effects.
- Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.
Level 4
- Show an increasing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
- Select, develop, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
- Use a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects.
- Organise texts. Using a range of appropriate structures.
Learning goals:
- To hook the reader in with an interesting beginning
- A variety of sentence starters
- A variety of sentence lengths
- Edit and rework
- Effective peer checking and feedback
Reflection: I planned my writing using a mind map. I am working hard on using capital letters and full stops.
Teacher Comment: Kanye, you worked really hard on planning this writing out and recording all your ideas down. You have tried to use some capital letters and full stops. Your next step is to try and record all the sounds you can hear in words.
